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Friday, July 5, 2019

steam rotation

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora. I am Mack from St Mary’s School.
    I really liked the way you were pacific about how the plants did nothing for a while then the grew a little bit.
    I learnt that it take a very long time to grow a plant.
    Maybe you could use the word “nothing” less.
    Please visit my blog
    here
    Mā te wā
    Mack

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  2. Kia ora. I am Talei from St Mary’s School.
    I really liked how you told us what happened day by day and how you summarized it all
    I learnt that seeds have different times to grow and longer times.
    Maybe you could make the text a little bit bigger
    Please visit my blog
    here

    Mā te wā
    Talei

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